Annotation
A young girl learns how to be more
independent from her mother during a summer at the beach.
From The Critics
Publishers Weekly
Gritz-Gilbert's quiet, languidly
paced first novel takes place in a small beach community,
where New Yorker Amy spends the summer with her great-aunt
Jenny, who makes dolls from socks and smells "like
tangerines and yellowed books." Though Amy is determined
to shake her "Mama's girl" image and make
new friends, she's homesick for her overprotective mother
and greatly misses "not just the feel of Mom's
hugs but their smell, like a loaf of oatmeal bread baking."
Crystal, the girl next door who feels abandoned by her
most recent close friend, exacerbates matters when she
rebuffs Amy's attempts to get to know her, remaining
"as sharp and cold as the salt water when you first
step in." Amy's relationship with a kind, elderly
blind man who shows remarkable insight into Amy's feelings
provides some warm moments in the narrative. Yet the
standoff between the girls grows tiresome, as does the
author's heavy-handed, often flowery similes and imagery
(e.g., Crystal's voice "made Amy think of lacy,
old fashioned dresses"). Even the most poetic-minded
young readers may find this tale a bit old-fashioned.
Ages 7-10. (June)
Children's Literature
Young Amy is having trouble adjusting
to a summer away from her mother. She is visiting her
Great Aunt Jenny at the beach. Besides missing her mother,
Amy is disappointed when her efforts at making friends
with a neighbor girl are rebuffed. Luckily the other,
mostly elderly, neighbors are kind and one of them,
blind Mr. Fine, is especially understanding and supportive.
This low-key, realistic story would be a good choice
for beginning chapter book readers.
School Library Journal
Gr 3-5-While Amy's mother is away,
the child stays at the beach with her Great-Aunt Jenny.
During the summer she hopes to overcome her "Mama's
girl" image and become more independent. Crystal,
the only other girl her age in the neighborhood, snubs
her and Amy soon becomes frustrated. The elderly people
in the community witness this, but only blind Mr. Fine
understands the problem. He tells Amy that Crystal was
hurt when a friend she made last summer did not keep
in touch after she left. He also helps Amy deal with
her own homesickness by telling her about starfish and
their "magical" ability to grow back a lost
arm, explaining that the space left in her heart by
missing someone can be filled once again. When Amy describes
this analogy to Crystal, she reaches out and helps Amy
learn to ride a bike. The characters tend to be one
dimensional and the story has no surprises. Black-and-white
pencil drawings appear throughout. The theme of understanding
others from their point of view and finding one's place
is better dealt with in Patricia MacLachlan's Arthur,
for the Very First Time (Harper, 1980), but Gritz-Gilbert's
book is easier reading and will appeal to fans of seashore
stories.-Marlene Gawron, Orange County Library, Orlando,
FL
Kirkus Reviews
Amy's painful separation from her
mother is soothed by a budding friendship with Crystal
and her brother Raymond in this idealized story of one
girl's summer. Amy has always been a "mama's girl"
who misses her mother terribly, a starfish missing an
arm. During her summer stay at the beach with sock-doll
fanatic Great-aunt Jenny, Amy is determined to be brave,
to deal with her homesickness, and to try to make new
friends. Crystal, who lives next door, snubs her every
effort, belittling her for not knowing how to ride a
bike, and for knowing sidewalk games from the city,
instead of beach games, such as tickle bottom and poke
the jelly. Only blind old Mr. Fine, who stands out among
a cast of overly agreeable adults, really understands
Amy. When Amy enlists Crystal and Raymond to help her
steal socks from the line to cure her great-aunt's "sock
doll block," she lands them in trouble. This tame
sequence of events, glimpsed in realistic black-and-white
illustrations, is brought to a candy-coated close when
Amy rides a bike without training wheels. It's unfortunate
that Amy's independence and bravery comes only to gain
Crystal's approval; the greater problem is that in presenting
an interracial friendship (Crystal and Raymond are African-American),
the author smooths over personalities to the point of
blandness. (Fiction. 7-10)